Perth Park

[amplified77]

This was taken at Perth's King Park.
As usual.. i tried to capture the beauty of the park and the war memorial.

Will realli appreciate comments.

Picture was taken with my D40x :
1/250
f/10
23mm
ISO 140

Thanx ppl.

 

[amplified77]

Can't seem to attach the pic..
All i do is paste the url the image dialogue right?

I'll try again

 

[weisiong87]

my noob 2 cents... i like this picture..very clean, no distractions.. and i especially like the very clear blue sky...no clouds nothing just clear blue..great capture!! nice colors, composition wise cant comment...noob my self.. :thumbsup:

 

[ssping83]

i think the trees on the left are distracting.. is there any other vantage point where you can capture only the memorial and the sky?

 

[grumpy]

This was taken at Perth's King Park.
As usual.. i tried to capture the beauty of the park and the war memorial.

For that, i think you did not capture what you wanted to achieve. reason, because you are only showing a very tiny part of the park.

But you did capture the memorial and the city skyline but the trees are a slight distraction. But would prefer the memorial more to the right, as you have a nice leading line towards it. A little more interest in the foreground might help this pic, i find it a bit too empty.

I guess there is little choice : you either live with the trees; or go closer, concentrate on the memorial and lose the buildings.

 

[amplified77]

Firstly..
Thanx all for the comments appreciate it.

Guess i was trying to hard to get everything in frame.. Hehe. Trees, memorial, bldgs, bla bla..
Point noted. Will concentrate on the primary objective from now on.

 

[Old Boy]

Instead of having floating half branches of a tree,maybe shift a little to the left to have it complete and forego the little space on the right of the monument. But overall, the scene is nice !

 

[ernest_ted]

my suggestion;

go closer and lose the trees and the buildings.
take the monument from the left with more space on the right for the sea + blue blue sky.