Nice colors, nice pose and models' expression. Would have been better if the tip of her white shoes are not peeking out from under her dress.
I agree that a tighter crop, with the model's position following "rule of the 3rds" might be better.
Personally, I would lose the Chinese words. During my time, I was very put off by meanless Chinese poems and meaningless English poems with typos. Guess that stuck with me whenever I see Chinese words in wedding albums ;p
aiya, ignore the extra wordings. hehe...that will be quite subjective. if being place wrongly, it will spoil the whole picture one. cover it with your hands lor hehe.