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[liebreglach]

first time try on model shooting..

C&C are welcome

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[catchlights]

good to see you retain the natural light feel, didn't over fill if there is any.

basically all the poses are rather similar, so it will be good if you have more variation, or try different cropping on the layout, if not, show less photos is more than enough.

full frontal shots are usually less flattening, especially for not so slim girls, her expression is great, you should focus on that, instead of her posing.

 

[weegk]

good effort in the arrangement of the photos . . .

but . . . the choice of photos can be improved in my opinion if you don't mind, just my 2 cents of comments and suggestions;
#1 is nice, it attracts my attention with the nice background of the boats. Maybe a different angle from her at the bottom 2nd 0r 3rd photos which looks almost the same.
#2 with the 2 photos of her at the trees and the one below with the boats gives a feeling that you are trying to just wanted to complete this series with any photos on hand. There should be consistency of background/theme for the photos in your grouping.

Overall i enjoy this series as it takes effort to rearrange them and i love her smiles on her face which show that she is enjoying the photo session.

 

[liebreglach]

Bro catchlights
Thank for your comment .. it my first comment in clubsnap hope to learn more
Another friend was helping me by holding the reflector (the one that use to sunshade the car)
Will shot on her Convocation this weekend..
Any tips that i need to keep in mind before press the shuttle

Bro weegk
Happy that you like the arrangement.
Will have 7 more photo will upload tonite

Thank for Viewing

 

[catchlights]

pay attention on fine details, scan thru your viewfinder before you click.
try not to pose your subject full frontal all the way.
give her something (props) to hold on to if she do not how to pose her hands.

 

[SJvizuals]

Loving the layout. Consistent exposure is good.

 

[liebreglach]

Loving the layout. Consistent exposure is good.

thank bro C&C are welcome

 

[liebreglach]

pay attention on fine details, scan thru your viewfinder before you click.
try not to pose your subject full frontal all the way.
give her something (props) to hold on to if she do not how to pose her hands.

will take note on this