My take on Sarice

[saifulbahar]

Hi all,

As usual I share my take on Sarice. And as usual, all comments whether good or bad are welcomed and appreciated.

#1

#2

#3

 

[saifulbahar]

#4

#5

#6

#7

 

[saifulbahar]

#8

#9

#10

#11

 

[Sampoerna]

#8 - Error on the eyes, look blue to me

#11 - Mind to share how you do it?

 

[nemesis32]

#8 eyes look blue on my screen also..

One thing i noticed.. u seems to like to shoot a bit lower then eye level of model... it results in slightly unflattering pose, like #1 where the neckline is very obvious. Usually, shooting just above the nose/eye will be good for portraiture shoot, or so i was told..

 

[leejay]

Poses and composition for 8 and 9 are good.

 

[saifulbahar]

#8 - Error on the eyes, look blue to me

#11 - Mind to share how you do it?

Noted on #8... Maybe the relection of the roofing... don't know.. will check again...
#11 - Can show you if we meet, i don't know how to explain the workflow... :embrass:

#8 eyes look blue on my screen also..

One thing i noticed.. u seems to like to shoot a bit lower then eye level of model... it results in slightly unflattering pose, like #1 where the neckline is very obvious. Usually, shooting just above the nose/eye will be good for portraiture shoot, or so i was told..

Noted on #8... Maybe the relection of the roofing... don't know.. will check again...

Shooting angle... ok, will try that the next time... thanks... appreciate it.

Poses and composition for 8 and 9 are good.

thanks