Moving Souls...


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espion

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find the black smear in top left quadrant distracting.

also find the train wavy, not that it shld not be, but the waves kinda irregular, and again unsettling.

maybe use a longer exposure so all these features are 'smoothed' out - just an idea.
 

S11loop

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Font looks alright to me if u want to show yr title and it occupy lower left of the corner of the photo , but what i dont understand is yr title and yr photo dont match ... moving souls ? train + human ?
 

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