Maiden ROM pics

[mooseq]

Need experts' comments on a couple of pics I took a buddy's ROM last weekend. Taken using an Oly C7070.

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#1

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#2

 

[saltandlight]

i'm no expert, but random comments if you don't mind.

#1 looks kinda OOF.

sepia effect was nice in #2 but i think would be nice if the focus were more on the couple than on the photographer. like shift the frame to the left abit more.

 

[ozora]

Yup, agreed too that pic 1 is OOF.

 

[~Arcanic~]

besides the oof in #1, i would suggest to reposition the couple so that the tree is not growing out of the bride's head...

 

[ExplorerZ]

yup think 1st 1 a little out of focus, and is worsed by the softness

 

[mooseq]

Hmmm..very constructive comments... thanxs all.. really appreciate it...