@Deadpoet - Firstly thanks for the critique. The plan was indeed to get more emotions and expressions out of it, feel and emotions of innocence , feeling in Love and sadness.I have a 2nd part that I have yet to process where some of the sadness and expressed with tears running down but again it needs to be presented correctly else the reflection may seem like oily face . Overall I agree, more room for improvement........to bring out more facial expression that i would like to express through the photos