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[francisdcx]

Hey guys, C&C welcomed.

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[Raspy]

Shot is very beatiful. The wind effect also seems good. The hair is not perfect but nice. And is there a reason why you choose a greenish cast or white balance, or is it my monitor showing me like that...

 

[aprilmei]

you using a wind machine is a good idea.
Catch-lights in her eyes is also good.
Her shoulder made it look like a hump. (Since it's a tight crop, it get into my way).
Background has green and white, that irritates.
Green cast, very subjective but I like. :thumbsup:

 

[francisdcx]

Thanks for the comments

 

[francisdcx]

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