Jeslin - Splashing

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[garou12]

2 n 4 are the best composition's tight and well constructed and she geniuinely looks like she's having fun playing with the water! Well done! :thumbsup: I take it she got pretty wet for this shoot?

 

[Virgo]

My vote goes to 1 and 2, but if you can zoom out a little more to show her full dress, that would be perfect.

 

[easterd]

:angel: is Good have feeling:angel:

 

[Jesmun18]

2nd one got feel... it will be my pick....

 

[wing oscar]

i like #2 & #4... great shots & she look enjoy getting wet :bsmilie: ... :thumbsup:


it juz my view...

 

[acerpic]

2 n 4 are the best composition's tight and well constructed and she geniuinely looks like she's having fun playing with the water! Well done! I take it she got pretty wet for this shoot?

Ya, she is very accommodating and good attitude. Very versatile, kudo to her. :thumbsup:

Thanks Virgo, Easterd and Jesmun18 for comments.

2 more added.

 

[Reliance]

sexy :thumbsup:

 

[zac08]

#2 shows off her body nicely, but I would really love it if she had lowered her left shoulder down more...

 

[garou12]

Ya, she is very accommodating and good attitude. Very versatile, kudo to her. :thumbsup:

Thanks Virgo, Easterd and Jesmun18 for comments.

Which fountain was that? And i have to ask when you were shooting her getting soaked were there alot of people standing around gawking?

 

[acerpic]

Which fountain was that? And i have to ask when you were shooting her getting soaked were there alot of people standing around gawking?

All my posted 4 series were taken @ Clarke Quay.

 

[ahfaii]

good model + good photography skills = nice pics you have there! :thumbsup:

 

[garou12]

All my posted 4 series were taken @ Clarke Quay.

very nice. No crowd then i take it?

 

[benchuatl]

First I need to say it was well done.

However, I personally felt that subject has a good figure as a whole, should focus more on full body shot then the facial expression....

try something like this with more colourful dressing...

All the best.:thumbsup:

 

[garou12]

i think in this case he was going for a more artistic and lively approach rather than glam so the facial shots work.

 

[leejay]

i like #2 & #4... great shots & she look enjoy getting wet :bsmilie: ... :thumbsup:


it juz my view...

Agree with oscar. :thumbsup:

 

[yumyum]

she sweet to mi

 

[lilylidou]

the second is best

 

[ST1100]

Think you failed to nail the focus on the eyes on #2, 3 and 5. i would also prefer to push up #4 a bit to lighten her complexion. Eyes also would look a lot better with a little catchlight. She should dry her face properly for #5; since there is no context of a fountain in that picture, the little drop of water on her nose is totally out of place. My 2 cents.

 

[acerpic]

Think you failed to nail the focus on the eyes on #2, 3 and 5. i would also prefer to push up #4 a bit to lighten her complexion. Eyes also would look a lot better with a little catchlight. She should dry her face properly for #5; since there is no context of a fountain in that picture, the little drop of water on her nose is totally out of place. My 2 cents.

Your points are noted and I am appreciated. I hope i have another chance to do this kind of shots. and see can produce improved photos.