One slight improvement will make the End of shot perfect....angle of light good, model's left cheek shadow good, the ring wing of his nose's shadow just above his lips nice, but the left side shadow becomes unsightly, too big a lump above the lips, plus also the shadow of left side of lips too. To remedy, photographer just give instruction to model to turn his head VERY slightly to his right and tilt JUST A LITTLE up to balance the shadow of his nose, everything remains the same but the shadow will be improved.
Just pay a bit more attention to details next round in your photo outing.
Next stop...passenger pls alight to board the train across the platform to proceed to advance stage photography...
