Actually, there is no need to be overly protective of your images. End up, your 2 bold signatures are fighting for attention within all your shots ... make it hard for viewers to see your subject clearly.
Your pictures are underexposed, but a little PS-ing will do the trick. However, there is a lack of "punch" to the picture, and this has alot got to do with the posing. So, needless to say, your posing has much to be improved. She her face also looked forced when she poses. too tense maybe?? :bsmilie: you can do better next time. jiayou!