Gloomy town


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hmm my very first post, a new photographer to the world of photography too. Picture taken at yishun mrt station at 1901hrs..=)
here are the properties:
Camera: Nikon D80
Exposure: 0.001 sec (1/800)
Aperture: f/7.1
Focal Length: 135 mm
ISO Speed: 400
Exposure Bias: 0/6 EV
ISO Speed: 400

i did some post editing merely adjusting hue and saturation. yup
btw can anyone see the pic? not sure how to post picture..=X
if not here is the link http://flickr.com/photos/39303983@N00/388784119/

c&c are welcome thankss =)
 

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some potential in this photo for a picture: a contrast of mysterious darkness against a bright lively sky. And so the shadows on the right are too heavy and too much, less of that, and more of the skies above. Then a more composed picture with better balance of the elements: light, dark, manmade, nature ... I think ur intention was the balance the 2 vertical columns on left with 2 on right. Thats good but needs a different perspective. Shot from any other angle?
 

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yup didnt want to 'tilt' the buildings too much. actually couldnt get more of other manmade and nature cos i was on the mrt platform and during the sunset time it was a little golden and contrasting light which i hastily snap this shot. i did tone down the darkness abit on the right. should have brighten it then. thanks!~ ^.^
 

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No dont brighten it, chop it off altogether ... guess the most valuable thing in this pic are the take away lessons, so the next time u can compose deliberately and quickly, the epitome being to do it apparently instinctively ...
 

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hardly anything in the pic to admire. learn about subject matter, something that would make user interested in the pic.

also, i understand you are new but i dont think its useful to add exif details.

thanks.
 

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