Flag seller

[nightshade8088]

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1. in what area is critique to be sought?
Composition and Lighting

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
Feeling alone

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
Friday morning , walking past a small garden in NY city and saw this man placing flags next to his street stall

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
I like the man and the flags that stand out from the rest. Still trying to learn composition.

 

[upsaC]

The composition is not very nice. Too dark on the left side. The man, the flag and the fence look too messy since the are too near and overlapped. Cheers.

 

[nightshade8088]

Thanks for the feedback.

 

[frozty]

I feel that the subject is quite interesting because of his striped shirt and flags. Maybe a tighter crop would give a better composition as the picture now is very messy.

 

[biskandar]

Is more interesting if you do the split toning , put the flag colour as it is .

 

[nightshade8088]

Crop just between the Man and the flag?

 

[nightshade8088]

Please advice on the crop image, Thanks.

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