first pic i post : )


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tikaaa

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i'd like feedbacks on everything, i just start my photography journey, and i'm sure i still have lots to learn.
well i took this picture on Water Day, some people were demonstrating in the middle of the city. by the way, he meant "save water for life" haha. i just want to make more people care about water.
i like this pic's composition, the sky looks nice and all. so i positioned the men at the far right, so the background shows.
thanks : ))

 

scouse23

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you might want to crop it to a smaller size. and i feel that your watermark is rather big and distracting, might make it smaller and place it somewhere not so distracting. other than that, i quite like the message given by them :D

cheers :)
 

Eloriel

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Agree about the watermark.

The photo also looks a little overexposed. And the white balance/levels...I presume it's there to highlight the 'water' theme? Otherwise a little warmer would be good. (:)

Cool guys, btw.
 

mrhello88

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well, the photo seem over exposed too much..and the attracting point inside the pic is not very obvious, and a lot of empty space inside.. maybe a bit of crop and changes in contrast will help..
 

JohnnyW

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Buildings are experiencing "falling" effect. Try to correct it by tilting it back?

The skyline is tilting to one side, abit uncomfortable.

The 2 guys in the bg is great. Adds and bring out the 2 dudes in the foreground.
 

bahibo

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Love the man message, too bad he is Man-u fan. try to level the vertical line next time. There is a blue tint on the photo, like u shoot through some windows or WB problem. Would be great if have some water day activities going on in the background :) Try to frame them a bit lower or higer vertically , so can fit in 1/3rd part, would prefer higher so less sky, more man. :D my 10cents
 

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