Chloe & Jojo

[kernel]

Thanks for your comments

 

[benedium]

wow, nice and refreshing treatment.
nice gals too ;p

 

[jOhO]

erm... looks awkward..

i was thinking maybe either both look at the cam... or both look in the same direction. (too cliche perhaps?)

crop's abit tight too.

and also.. was wondering if they could swop positions, show side profile of the er.. not so slim one (so she looks slimmer) and front profile of the slimmer one since she's slim anyway... haha make sense?

ok dun mind me. cheers!!

 

[nemesis32]

Nice models but find the expressions a bit off?

 

[Drudkh]

the post is not natural to me.

 

[Splutter]

Poses are indeed a little weird, but I find the overall mood to be rather intersting.

 

[digipat2003]

overall nice :thumbsup: just find that something not right, likely the expression ?

just my thoughts

 

[Witness]

the colours concur to the mood..... low contrast...

buten i tink the eyes look a tad lifeless to me.... and the direction of ya two model's eyes dun concur tt well imho...

cheers...

 

[kernel]

Thanks for your comments

I agree the models were not into it in this photo. I think they were to tired from a long shoot.

 

[ron1818]

the facial expression is not so natural but the color scheme is very good