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arabpunk

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3 parts..mothers arms, baby, blurry background..so wats is the main target of the pic..maybe u should crop it to main the target.
 

ryuggen

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Main target-child
Mother and arm- frame and relationship
Blurbackground-depths


Please advise why the couldnt the main subject stand out in ur view?
 

arabpunk

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ur blurry image is not smooth...maybe u should get more closer to the child
 

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#1, the highlight of the b/g is distracting.
#2, the arm of the mother is same tone as the child face.
#3, the placement of the child's eyes nor here or there.

btw this is a shot should try with available light, no flash.
 

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#1, the highlight of the b/g is distracting.
#2, the arm of the mother is same tone as the child face.
#3, the placement of the child's eyes nor here or there.

btw this is a shot should try with available light, no flash.
Noted. Thank you.

I've burned the mother's arm so as to bring out the child's face. Not enough burn?

Please advise the placement of the eyes.
 

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Noted. Thank you.

I've burned the mother's arm so as to bring out the child's face. Not enough burn?

Please advise the placement of the eyes.
this will not help, beside the arm, the strap looks distracting too.

your goal is to get almost right straight out from the camera, post production is to add some finishing touches.

 

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