c & c: Color Tone

[desaintlights]

Hi guys and friends.

I'm trying out some tritones techniques. Does this photo work for you ?

how can I improve more in terms of color tone ? the shadow, midtones and highlights.... please don't bother about the compo.... my focus here is on the color tone.... thanks ya

shoot me pls !

thanks and cheers

ps: anyone here with experience in tritone processing ? I would like to know how to bring out the focus in the photo more ? ie. to make it dramatic.. and powerful...

 

[darkroom]

Not sure if this is better.

Increased the contrast and played with curves in photoshop.

Also added a slight gradient/shadow on the bottom left to 'darken' the area her hand is.

Objective? To give more emphasis on the face and bring out some details.

 

[cheguthamrin]

Errr.. did you just emphasised on her eyebags / dark rings there??

 

[desaintlights]

emphasis on the face especially on the eys...

problem is i dunno how to bring it out in the photo ~ or perhaps, the photo itself is bad... ???