Buying Snacks at Jonker Street

[biskandar]

1. in what area is critique to be sought?
The feeling of night market

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
Shoot in the during the transaction frame , use flash gun apply into my camera to help lighting because it already night

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
Busy people in night market

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
Not sharp enough , specially on the food bucket

 

[ZerocoolAstra]

1) you got in close... this is good :thumbsup: Filled up the frame nicely, and no real distracting elements.
2) good capture of the expression on the girl's face, and the appreciative look on the mother's (i assume mother) face as she reaches out to collect the cash.
Yeah, could have been sharper, but still a good shot nonetheless

 

[biskandar]

Many thanks zerocoolastra