I find the layout is clean and precise. The watch face caught my attention right on. I do not like the space at the top between the edge and the word "Butterfly dreams". Seemed to give me that impression that it is bottom heavy. Could it be purposefully added for a reason?
Thanks guys.. *finally*... tot I'm really taking in too crap that I'm producing crappy images....
@nospeech - din realise it has that toplight, bottom heavy effect. Actually I want to illustrate the fact that it's like cascading effect from bottom up as liken to consciousness to dreams transition. Perhaps it's just me.. haha...
@Nivlek - the tip is MAHJUNG PAPER and 1 main flourescent tube lighted 45degrees to the watch face and a bounce flash straight on setup
2 sides of the coin.. that little shadow was left there coz I want to have little 3D realism as oppose to the normal watch shoot which floats in empty air