hmm...I see you managed to load your pics now...heh..
let me start off then...lIked the last pic best among the series...the frown on the kid's face compliments well with the zoom in effect...
the 2nd pic does nothing for me...seems like an ordinary snapshot...maybe you could've step back and zoom in and try use some DOF to isolate out the subject...the backgrnd trees a lil distracting...
the 1st pic...I would have prefered an eye contact shot...also...looks a tad under for the exposure...