Hmmm to be honest... i dun feel the abducted feeling... more like some guy kena bully or something... there was this thread done qwhile back i think it was titled to kidnap a xmm or something... that one was really good.
For this series... maybe you could have shown the person actually being abducted, putting a cell phone to his face. stuff like tht. Valiant attempt though :thumbsup: just keep shooting you will get there!