a preview, tranquil.

[tanglewire]

love to have some comments and feedback. will not be uploading the full series because permission aren't granted haha

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[tanglewire]

part 2 with iso800.

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[iguanavon]

http://www.clubsnap.com/forums/members/127225-tanglewireHi Tanglewire, i think perhaps it would be better not to place the flare at the model's underarm for photo 3?

 

[zane80]

I am always amazed at how others are able to see details so well.
The flare does looks like it is indicating something abt the armpit.

 

[tanglewire]

yea noted. i do find it pretty distracting too

 

[iguanavon]

I am always amazed at how others are able to see details so well.
The flare does looks like it is indicating something abt the armpit.

I guess perhaps it's because the flare is on the "rule of third" gird? That's why seems more prominent

 

[tanglewire]

probably so

 

[Rashkae]

I guess perhaps it's because the flare is on the "rule of third" gird? That's why seems more prominent

Nah, to me it sticks out because it's so out of place, with a color tone that does not match the ambient light. It sticks out like a sore thumb.

 

[nemesis32]

#2,3,6,7,8 are good. The last 3 pp i think a tad too yellow? I know it's intentional but i think prob the effect you going is an aged look rather than a yellow/baked look?

 

[tanglewire]

#2,3,6,7,8 are good. The last 3 pp i think a tad too yellow? I know it's intentional but i think prob the effect you going is an aged look rather than a yellow/baked look?

hey thanks and yea, you are definitely right. i am adjusting the yellowishness of the photo for my final output