A Girl

[Octarine]

Imho I dont see a need for that. It perfectly depicts the a photographer / subject relationship here.

I like the reflection.

I fully agree - that makes the picture really interesting. The reflection is something for the second look. Any editing would kill this and I don't think the edited eye would look better ...

 

[deklan]

u must be standing real close to get that shallow DOF!
if u still like the bokeh the way it is, u could try standing further from subject and zoom in for the same crop to get a little more depth!

 

[Outlook]

 

[kevinpump]

Yes, the Dof does work good. And your picz are nice...i like them. But, some cases the dof make model's nose look lower a bit

 

[kenny ooi]

nice...Superb shot.