Hi jeanie, it has been quite some time since I came back to clubsnap.org. Viewing your work now makes me realised that how much I've been slacking. Ever since the last time we discuss about photography, your vision and technique has improved a lot. These series is the greatest evidence to that statement.
The composition idea, colour saturation and model interaction has been wonderful. Of course I wouldn't say it is totally perfect but definitely compared to several months ago when you shoot your friend at punggol. Your level of photography has breakthrough another level.
Congrat my friend. Keep on shooting.