2 portrait

[Aaron77Xiong]

#1

#2

 

[leejay]

Quite okay. The stairs are a good backdrop. Chio model and nice black dress.

 

[airforce1]

Try focus on the eyes. Good attempt .

 

[Aaron77Xiong]

thanks you comment

 

[advrider]

#2. is nice.

 

[g-khoo]

Some quick comments.

Overall good technical control. Sharp pics. Well-exposed.

Green cast apparent in both scenes.

The DI on #2 looks a little weird. Loss of detail on face. Eyelashes seem missing.

 

[photo.cavendish]

Nice try..

 

[Harry Potter]

Very pretty model. :lovegrin:

 

[CreaXion]

#2. is nice.

Beg to differ. No 1 is ok. If the eyes has been sharper, would have different results. The second pic is definitely wrong. Feel very distorted due to the wide angle lens. Hands are not placed nicely. I can't tell u what is wrong. U have to read books on portraiture to find out.

 

[horizon_grazer]

#1 is good, especially the lighting n crop (The model porcelain skin helps too ;p)
When prevent it from being great is your focus is on her hair instead of her eyes

Good try !

 

[Luval]

what's up with the color tint.. green everywhere.
n probably u realized that shooting top down, gives the model a big head effect . if that is intentional