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Another series to share. C&C is welcome.

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#2
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dun mind me asking, what are you trying portray in your fotos? 相思与等待吗? 女主角在等一个不会出现的男主角?
 

I think you're going for the artistic feel... however I find the background too distracting and the under-exposure a bit hard on the eyes... Better expressions will be great... :)
 

It feels cinema-style. But the focus is off and background is cluttered. It took me quite awhile to see what's really there in photo #1.
 

cinema-style was my thought too, exactly.. but the focus is off and a bit too underexposed for my liking. keep it up, im sure ur next attempt will greatly improve on this :)
 

i think your subject needs to be more obvious? everything is too cluttered le. jiayou! :)
 

I think the cinematic style is quite nice and unique. But the off-focus really hurts your photos technically.