you don't seem to have much bokeh, the tree (the big one in the middle ground) is not very blurred, its kinda distracting my eyes from the model. maybe if she was on the left side of the frame rather than the right, so that the tree bark would be covered by her and the dragon-scale ferns on the trunk were showing instead, it wouldn't be so distracting?
heh and got one piece of tissue paper at her feet. intentional?