interesting.. maybe a few suggestions..
this picture still doesnt have that OMPH factor..
it looks slightly lopsided, u could correct that.
maybe..
1. a tighter crop?
2. the way the picture is composed, makes me want to see more on the right side. due to the way the chair seems to be telling me that something wants to be seen on the right.
3. b/w instead of sepia? the sepia toning used in this picture does give me any nostalgic feel that im suppose to get, also, i dont think sepia may work well with this picture. maybe im wrong
these are my suggestions though..
on top of that, the trees add more detail and depth, pity the concrete, or else you can give it a more earthly feel (maybe a tighter crop can do it?)
keep it up!