i love the font, and styling of ur signature on ur pic....cz its more attractive than the model nice expression but ur framing needs more attention, hot spots on ur model hand is a big :nono: and its distracting too much:think:
yeah besides the hotspots. besides shooting in studios means you have absolute control. at the moment she is lacking some backlight. for he hair at least. and maybe shift the perspective to eye level looks a little weird for me from below