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[Splutter]

Haven't really done shoots by myself for a long time. Critiques welcome!!!

 

[Pro Image]

One minor nitpick...her left leg. Somehow it's hanging in the air. I rather have it either resting on her right knee or higher up in the air.

 

[porshee]

could be a cool Shoe Ad tho...

 

[Witness]

its a pretty cool shot man...

 

[knoxknocks]

i like it! :thumbsup:

 

[zaren]

works for me....the "hanging" left leg makes it unique IMHO. having the left leg resting on the right leg or higher up in the air is a much more common shot. now u've introduced both tension and a focal point just above her right knee. very nicely done.

 

[Splutter]

Pro Image, zaren : I actually have versions of different angle, but somehow I like the small gap. Maybe like what Zaren says, it creates a tension of sorts.

porshee : I was thinking of that too, but the focus isn't really on the shoe, is it? Anyway it doesn't look good enough, hahaz.

Witness,knoxknocks : Thanks bros

 

[1911]

cool man! using one top light?

 

[topster]

Great shot. Really grabbed my attention.

 

[ndroo]

works for me....the "hanging" left leg makes it unique IMHO. having the left leg resting on the right leg or higher up in the air is a much more common shot. now u've introduced both tension and a focal point just above her right knee. very nicely done.

I second that. Very nicely done :thumbsup:

 

[Splutter]

Thanks man. Looks like 1 top light, but I had to add in a front fill and a backlight to reduce contrast.

 

[AngelZhou]

i prefer the leg either not hanging or more hanging. Right now it seems not here not there. but i really like this shoot.

 

[foxtwo]

i'd prefer to see both her eyes, her head looks a little strange. And is such a thick capture of the mattress edge necessary? I find it rather ugly & distracting. Having it thinner would work better since the focus is in clean sharply defined lines. Cheers for a gd shot.

 

[afiend]

The lighting is nice... why didn't you do it in colour?
Also felt that the crop could be tighter and the model looking more towards the camera...

 

[Splutter]

Looks like mattress? This is bad, haha. It's actually fur on a wooden board.

Kenneth, I have many versions of this, but because the subject's face shape is kinda round, I think this is a tradeoff. Somehow I think the mono version looks more captivating, maybe because this pic emphasis more on shapes and lines?

 

[edrizal]

lovely. i like the tones here....how did u do it!?

 

[pRoLoS3r]

hmmm i like the tone of colours ... interesting shot to me ....
and leaves me to ponder wat she looking at shoe maybe ??

but i would also prefer to see her face.

Just my opinion

 

[Splutter]

edrizal, I converted it to black and white, and then added a colourized hue and sat layer to tint it a little.

pRoLoS3r, thanks for feedback