Wine Glasses~


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solarii

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Hmmm... you might wanna show more of the body... the curves of the glasses

Other then that its ok. With still life & abstract its pretty much up to you how you want to present your subject
 

foxtwo

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no strong anchor of interest. something to break up the pattern alittle. a pattern by itself is useless, u need colour, tonality. eg. to spruce up the image, drop a colourful cocktail umbrella in the central wineglass.

u should consider converting b&w since e glasses are colourless.
 

Heartshape

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The lighting setup you chose makes the shot look very messy and unorganized.
It looks like you tried the traditional strip-light-on-one-side way of lighting which, in this instance caused each glass to have a reflection of the glasses around it.
Having no point of focus/ attraction weakens the shot. Imagine this: place a cherry in one of the glasses, zoom out a little, bring your camera a little higher, and focus your shot on the cherry. The cherry would add a very strong point of focus to an otherwise B&W shot, which will look really cool.
 

Jayson_Ang

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Thanks for the generous critiques guys...
I'll make a point to improve my shots with these pointers in mind
 

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