Hi, I think this is my first time posting on Critique Corner but definitely, don't hold back on your precious comments and opinions!
1. In what area is critique to be sought?
need of vignetting, composition, how to improve on background and overall feel of this photo
2. What one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
maximum sharpness with kit lens, colours of the flower
3. Under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
unfortunately it was sunny when i took out my gears to take this but it suddenly started get dark and rained. by the way, this is at my corridor. new plant that my dad brought back. took only few days to see it bloom.
4. What the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
i feel i got the sharpness there, clearly showing the outstanding colours of the plant from the dull background. But i was thinking maybe another background would be better? maybe like a brighter healthier green? I was really happy when i saw this shot.
Mod: You're linking to a flickr page instead to the image itself. To do that you need to go to the Flickr page and then right click on the image to get the URL of the image you want to post.
1. In what area is critique to be sought?
need of vignetting, composition, how to improve on background and overall feel of this photo
2. What one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
maximum sharpness with kit lens, colours of the flower
3. Under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
unfortunately it was sunny when i took out my gears to take this but it suddenly started get dark and rained. by the way, this is at my corridor. new plant that my dad brought back. took only few days to see it bloom.
4. What the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
i feel i got the sharpness there, clearly showing the outstanding colours of the plant from the dull background. But i was thinking maybe another background would be better? maybe like a brighter healthier green? I was really happy when i saw this shot.
Mod: You're linking to a flickr page instead to the image itself. To do that you need to go to the Flickr page and then right click on the image to get the URL of the image you want to post.
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