Walking our separate ways

[MarkTan89]

After all this while, we still couldn't make up our minds on where we were together so let's just walk our separate ways....

 

[lastboltnut]

Some how I find the far ends a little too dark...

 

[night86mare]

composition *first*

the framing here has included unnecessary elements, which add to the already potentially cluttered main idea (based on your title).

there seems to be some problem with exposure here , probably due to lighting conditions.

 

[MarkTan89]

ok I cropped away the dustbin and adjusted a bit of the contrast and brightness. Does it look better now ?

 

[lastboltnut]

It looks better now. I find the tonal range lacking....

 

[night86mare]

ok I cropped away the dustbin and adjusted a bit of the contrast and brightness. Does it look better now ?

better, yes.

but it is still not a strong photograph, don't get me wrong here; i'm not saying that it's horrible.