Walking our separate ways


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MarkTan89

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After all this while, we still couldn't make up our minds on where we were together so let's just walk our separate ways....
 

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composition *first*

the framing here has included unnecessary elements, which add to the already potentially cluttered main idea (based on your title).

there seems to be some problem with exposure here , probably due to lighting conditions.
 

MarkTan89

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ok I cropped away the dustbin and adjusted a bit of the contrast and brightness. Does it look better now ?
 

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ok I cropped away the dustbin and adjusted a bit of the contrast and brightness. Does it look better now ?
better, yes.

but it is still not a strong photograph, don't get me wrong here; i'm not saying that it's horrible.
 

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