Violin Concerto

[Acieed]

Comments most welcomed.

 

[espn]

There's too much empty space on the right, try a tighter crop

Colors and mood are there for me. Esp the motion blur.

Keep shooting.

 

[AReality]

Just the opposite for me...
Contrast a little overdone...
But the empty space works for me...

 

[Acieed]

There's too much empty space on the right, try a tighter crop

Colors and mood are there for me. Esp the motion blur.

Keep shooting.

The space was intentionally added. Doesn't work for you?

Thanks for the comments so far. Please keep them coming, wants to improve on it.

 

[Bluestrike]

Well it will be nicer if the whole of the player is in and that some wordings on the space on the right.

 

[Acieed]

Well it will be nicer if the whole of the player is in and that some wordings on the space on the right.

You're probably right, I had to crop the microphone off

But thought the space would add a sense of quietness of a concert hall in a solo performance.

 

[franciskc]

personal rubbish tinking:
Empty black space is good, Useful for advertising/poster to pass a clear message to the viewer on what is the focused subject.
Right elbow being cropped by the border. :think: