view from the top

[pangzzz]

hello, for your comments and critques...hit me with those dollars and cents

picture taken at sunshine observatory, tokyo.

 

[imouyang]

Maybe can decrease exposure further? Cant really see the buildings in the bg hence no feeling of from the top... Looks more like ppl appearing from a door if i had not notice the bg buildings...

 

[LCW85180]

I like the idea that the 2 subjects are framed up.

the picture, in my opinion, seems to be tell it own story.

I LIKED IT.

 

[eng_keow]

Nice compo.

Looks quite scarry actually. One step more and you better have a parachute that works. :sweat:

 

[standingup]

I always have problems with taking these silhouettes. Can you share with me what type of mettering did you use and where did you spot?

 

[pangzzz]

hi standingup, was using the canon A80 for that outing and the exif is as follows:

# Focal length: 11.4mm (35mm equivalent: 58mm)
# CCD width: 7.11mm
# Exposure time: 0.0063 s (1/160)
# Aperture: f/5.6
# Whitebalance: Auto
# Metering Mode: matrix

imouyang, point taken! u're quite right abt the buildings... will try to lower my exposure, and hopefully the weather would be a little better(was slightly hazy, couldnt even see mt fuji frm there) the next time i am there

any other comments on how can i better improve this pic?

 

[imouyang]

hi standingup, was using the canon A80 for that outing and the exif is as follows:

# Focal length: 11.4mm (35mm equivalent: 58mm)
# CCD width: 7.11mm
# Exposure time: 0.0063 s (1/160)
# Aperture: f/5.6
# Whitebalance: Auto
# Metering Mode: matrix

imouyang, point taken! u're quite right abt the buildings... will try to lower my exposure, and hopefully the weather would be a little better(was slightly hazy, couldnt even see mt fuji frm there) the next time i am there

any other comments on how can i better improve this pic?

COol~ I own an A80 too Great camera imo... Anw, not much comments to add but i do quite like the sun light... Quite warm... The mood is there