Uniquely Me!


kinky1971

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1. In what area is critique to be sought?
Composition, exposure, sharpness and detail. PP done is only auto-colour and auto-level.

2. What one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
To show the element of 'break the norm'.

3. Under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
Nikon D90 with kit lens. Cloudy day.

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
Noisy. Maybe 'blurring' the background and foreground can reduce the noise? :think:
 

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ed9119

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#2
nice contrast and colors.... i think the green goes well with the subjects..... the composition looks a little loose, just my personal opinion

get in closer with a longer lens or just step up.... there's this urge in me to want to feel the texture on those feathers, beaks and claws...

getting closer should help give you a little more bokeh and perhaps cut out some of the backlight in the background too

:thumbsup:
 

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is it just me or is there a purple overcast?
 

cabbySHE

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By having about 50% of non related backbrd plus some twigs appearing behind the bird, I ssuppose this is what you mean by " break the norm ".
 

kinky1971

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Errrmmm... 2nd and 3rd parrot are standing the same stance but the first is doing otherwise. My subject. :what:
 

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If the twig/leaf protruding out from the first parrot can be removed somehow, it'll be good!
 

cityhunter66

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Wow, the colours are very vibrant! Can print out and display for birdpark :)
But maybe can crop off the left side a bit, the brown twig not very nice
 

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