Tshirt design

[epia]

Hi guys, can input some comments into the 2 shirts below?

http://zelcadence.org/cpg/displayimage.php?album=10&pos=0 (Black)

http://zelcadence.org/cpg/displayimage.php?album=10&pos=1 (Original)

 

[Poledra]

IMHO, the white shirt looks better.
The black one looks a little too 'ah-bengy'. Anyway, black shirts are so overdone.

 

[epia]

Haha ok.. yep.. abit ah beng.. and ah pek to me ... so far the ratio of b:w is 40 60 .. haha..

 

[zaren]

the black one has more impact. the white one is just too bland.

 

[Prismatic]

Hmm... nice design, but I hope you are prepared to have quite different results when the t-shirts goes to print. Most machines will not be able to replicate your transparency effect on the T-shirt.

 

[epia]

Hmm actually i printed the white one... looks quite alrite to me... I'll test out the black one tomorrow :dunno:

 

[Incastasman]

Hmm actually i printed the white one... looks quite alrite to me... I'll test out the black one tomorrow :dunno:

Hi, did u try black n white 2gether (Mix)? no harm tryin..

Cheers!

Andrew

 

[Deceased]

Go for the white one.

But would prefer without the 2 blue boxes.

Just individual preference.
:think:

 

[glennyong]

nice... but the white maybe can use "greyer" to make the lines more outstanding from the white background.


the black is nice n ok. :thumbsup:

 

[Yildun]

My opinions as i do not know what the t-shirt design is all about:

(1) Basically, i have not heard of the term " Hun Luan Xing " before.

Hun luan = messy, chaotic(in a way)

xing = (self-explanatory)

i do not know what you are trying to express here by coining the 3 words together, and apparently your emphasis is on "xing".

(2) your radioactive sign looks out of place as well.

(3) square boxes lined up in order add no meaning to chaotic.

 

[sbs99]

Hi guys, can input some comments into the 2 shirts below?

http://zelcadence.org/cpg/displayimage.php?album=10&pos=0 (Black)

http://zelcadence.org/cpg/displayimage.php?album=10&pos=1 (Original)

Both look good...but im not sure if the black one looks good with a person wearing it. Maybe the design alittle heavy on the motiff on the black. But its still a good effort on the tees. :thumbsup: