Trapped Joker


stevesteve

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1. in what area is critique to be sought?

- Composition

- Abstract creativity

2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?

- First time trying still objects and with lightings

3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)

- dDarkness, with two color torchlights

4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture

- I quite like the picture, with dirty-yellow lighting creating a shadow of the glass
 

Sgdevilzz

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Perhaps showing more of the joker face would be better. Some people have difficulty reading "Joker" vertically :)
 

stevesteve

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Nice lightings.
But 1 thing to note. Maybe a close-up would be better. From 1st view, the bottle seems like the main subject.
because i was thinking of including the shadow (which IMO it might intrigue more feeling in it). haha. thanks. next time i will try to focus on my main topic :)
 

stevesteve

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Perhaps showing more of the joker face would be better. Some people have difficulty reading "Joker" vertically :)
haha. yea.. actually the shadow partially covering the word joker seems to be a bit of a hindrance or distracting...
 

hairyice

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The composition isn't bad, but too much green and yellow for me. And in terms of creativity.. you can do better!
 

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