i think it has potential, great feel by the mist, the foliage framing and fading out to the distance, the little girl in the dress, good choice of black and white. i cant really think of how to improve it, but gut feels that if the railing were not there..it might feel more believably towards the unknown, since the railing feels like a safe human construct. then again having said that i don't think you could have framed it without the railing..thanks, i enjoyed this photo.
I like the various graduated shades of the foliage. For me, the rails give a direction to where the girl is headed. The subject's outfit seems traditional. Frankly it reminds me of Narnia or some children's fairy tale adventure :thumbsup: