1. in what area is critique to be sought?
the cropping and lighting needed?
2. what one hopes to achieve with the piece of work?
i want to convey a sense of excitement and take the emotions of the kids goofing around
3. under what circumstance is the picture taken? (physical conditions/emotions)
I was just taking some quick snaps of some of my friends when i saw those kids throwing some kid in a pool.
4. what the critique seeker personally thinks of the picture
i feel there should be some sort of a way to convey what i want my viewers to see and that is emotions like excitement.