through the lens

[Wurdelak]

some shots to share... eager to improve my shots, constructive critisisms and advice are most welcome! thanks for dropping by!

screwed

masks

steps

dragin

 

[silvergetz]

Screwed: Adjust your level. Check your histogram. For white subject, need to +ev when shooting.

Mask: Looks ok to me. Probably increase the contrast abit more but watch the highlights.

Steps: Weird and uncomfortable composition.

Dragon: Nothing is in focus. Shallow DOF is ok, but eyes needs to be sharp.

Thanks for sharing.

 

[Wurdelak]

Screwed: Adjust your level. Check your histogram. For white subject, need to +ev when shooting.

Mask: Looks ok to me. Probably increase the contrast abit more but watch the highlights.

Steps: Weird and uncomfortable composition.

Dragon: Nothing is in focus. Shallow DOF is ok, but eyes needs to be sharp.

Thanks for sharing.

thank you for your comments and suggestions! it's very much appreciated. for "dragin" though... i am tryin to get that lomoish (plastic lens) effect... thanks again!:thumbsup:

 

[Wurdelak]

different strokes

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