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Manda

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I seem unable to post photos in here (even following the tips in FAQ).

If you can find the time to look into my flickr account (http://www.flickr.com/photos/67651678@N00/)and critique 'Bag Lady' for me I would be grateful.

Specifically - my technical choices and post-production technique - I don't think I've quite got it right.

Photo details: D50, prime 50m, Aperture Priority, 1/250, f5.6, metering pattern mode, shot in RAW, cropped & used grey scale in 'lightroom'.

Be brutally honest. I promise not to cry.

Thanks for your time :)

PS the image is 'saved for web' so the quality of poorer than the original
 

Doesn't really say anything to me, sorry. I think the conversion is not bad though, just be slightly mindful of the highlights.
 

nothing much to say about 'bag lady', but i liked 'barber'.
 

Would i be right to say that you were trying to target this shot in a journalistic point of view? The subject itself is good. But try placing her in her surrounding to tell us her story. Show the place she is in. Widen the crop. I think she'll make a great photostory subject.
 

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