The Sunset need feedback

[erickwan1989]

 

[erickwan1989]

 

[Goldenstars08]

The photos look good to me.

 

[Soldi]

1st and 2nd :thumbsup:

 

[henrylim]

Composition wise, not good for all the pictures. Colours may be quite strong and nice, but overall, there is no focal point in any of the pictures.

#1 - slanted horizon
#2 - slanted horizon, and lack of foreground subject (typical of aircraft shots)
#3 - distracting lampposts and crane arms in the silohuette; may wish to move your position for better angle
#4 - no strong focal point; building and trees not forming a strong subject for the sunset shot
#5 - again, no point of interest. However, I do see some potential for #5 here. I propose a crop for more impactful composition as follows:

#6 - Distracting wires hanging from left to right, may wish to move the composition down a little using the rule of the thirds.

just 2 cents here for your considerations.

 

[wattky]

:bsmilie: #5 looks like some mountain range with weird leaveless trees on them

 

[henrylim]

well... that is creative intepretation of the photo :bsmilie: :bsmilie:

 

[shadowmoses]

U might like to refer to the thread below, the photos are :thumbsup: :thumbsup:

http://forums.clubsnap.org/showthread.php?t=209153