The Security Guard on duty


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Was trying to make a picture story series out of a match I recently watch.
Full series can be seen here :
http://forums.clubsnap.org/showthread.php?t=252274


C&C welcome
 

I think this was shot at one of the entry to the gallery of National Stadium? ;)

It's security guard or policeman? Wanted to go catch one of the football match but too busy!
 

I see the silhouette of a man wearing a beret
Is he a guard, I dont know

Is he looking at the sky?
Why is the guard looking at the bright blinding overexposed sky
Why is the sky there ?

The two railings are distracting, crop it out completely
 

It works better when seen and read together with your commentary, like a photo essay. By it's own, it quite weak because the context is lost. My attention went to the bright spot in the sky and the cloud formations, the person/sillhoutte did not draw my attention.
 

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Was trying to make a picture story series out of a match I recently watch.
Full series can be seen here :
http://forums.clubsnap.org/showthread.php?t=252274


C&C welcome

tis image in itself is flawed, cos i dun understand y u have to have 2 black patch in the picture which does not contribute anything but just a waste of space.

the railing is a distraction esp it leads down to the black patch

the part beside the guy is another distraction.

overall, bad use of border and bad composition.
 

could losen the crop, the 2 little specks of stairhand railings are pretty annoying, it'll look better in a wider perspective
 

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