It works better when seen and read together with your commentary, like a photo essay. By it's own, it quite weak because the context is lost. My attention went to the bright spot in the sky and the cloud formations, the person/sillhoutte did not draw my attention.
tis image in itself is flawed, cos i dun understand y u have to have 2 black patch in the picture which does not contribute anything but just a waste of space.
the railing is a distraction esp it leads down to the black patch