The Gift Of Time

[drama]

The Gift of Time

From a friend

It doesnt keep time

But I dont care

Cos its cool in blue

C&C welcome

 

[neoliyam]

nothing interesting in the shot i would have to say. try different angle or idea.

thanks.

 

[drama]

Thanks for the feedback neoliyam
Will work on it

 

[bigbun]

maybe u need to choose a more dramatic background...

 

[drama]

good one bigbun
It needs to be more dramatic

 

[imissy]

background's too plain imo

couldnt get what you want to present, from the picture

 

[pokiemon]

watch out for the flash.

 

[drama]

pokiemon
no flash used

Any reccomendations for a background?
I now feel that the execution needs more work, lots more

 

[numzkull]

hmm.... how about taking it in a dark room with only one light shining from the side?

btw, the joint in #1, 2 & 3 looks like its cracked. to me, that kinda takes away the effect of the curve of the object.

 

[drama]

numzkull

Good idea will try
That does look like a crack, but it is not
It is definitely distracting