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Redstar202

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Hi all,
This was taken at the already closed Chinatown Market. Any comments and suggestions to improve on this will be much appreciated. Thank you in advance.

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Redstar202 said:
Hi all,
This was taken at the already closed Chinatown Market. Any comments and suggestions to improve on this will be much appreciated. Thank you in advance.

webMG_2836.jpg

that is wonderful. really great lines and contrast, very visually startling
 

I agree with the rest. It is graphically appealling (strong symmetrical lines). Technically, it is not a good image. You need to work on your exposure technique.

In short, I wouldn't look at it for more than 5 seconds. Next, please.....
 

Would be more interesting if you are able to move a few angle of it ..

The contrast create between the line give a visual swap between foreground and background which is interesting ...

but can't help to felt a little off on the Angle . a narrow angle would express that contrast stronger .. instead of the wide --

the Far left is taking away the focus and neat layout that you try to create ..

i would a well intented shot - which appeal to few
i am sure most people would spend more then 5 sec on it .. :)

great work keep it up

osix uvlux
 

Thank you for the comments, guys. Really appreciate all the input (positive and negative)and i will be working at it.
 

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