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Hi all,
This was taken at the already closed Chinatown Market. Any comments and suggestions to improve on this will be much appreciated. Thank you in advance.

 

kirschrot

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Redstar202 said:
Hi all,
This was taken at the already closed Chinatown Market. Any comments and suggestions to improve on this will be much appreciated. Thank you in advance.

that is wonderful. really great lines and contrast, very visually startling
 

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I agree with the rest. It is graphically appealling (strong symmetrical lines). Technically, it is not a good image. You need to work on your exposure technique.

In short, I wouldn't look at it for more than 5 seconds. Next, please.....
 

Uvlux

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Would be more interesting if you are able to move a few angle of it ..

The contrast create between the line give a visual swap between foreground and background which is interesting ...

but can't help to felt a little off on the Angle . a narrow angle would express that contrast stronger .. instead of the wide --

the Far left is taking away the focus and neat layout that you try to create ..

i would a well intented shot - which appeal to few
i am sure most people would spend more then 5 sec on it .. :)

great work keep it up

osix uvlux
 

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