Suspense


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Jwenz

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anything bout to improve this ?
 

It's pretty darn good, beautiful tonal range, but what's the headline about?
 

the big patch of white bokeh and a smaller white patch above it to the left is slightly distracting
 

i dont really feel any suspense here.
on the contrary, the cat looks quite stoned / calm.
the body language does not suit the title. :)
 

I kinda agree that the small white batch above its head is a little distracting. I think the b/g would have been better with something slighty more even and less contrasty as it is competing for attention. The overall tonal range and contrast are good though. babykailian has a good point about the body language too. The cat does seem a little calm and not very anxious to me.
 

hmm, thanks for commenting and advising ya..
will improve.
thanks.
 

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