oh, after looking at drama's reply, i noticed the concept in this photo. I'd agree with drama that your concept is good, but also not to deny the fact that, for a picture to be a piece of good photo, u need to frame it and compose it the way that will attract viewer's attention and to further explore the photo, which you'd failed.
there's no point posting a photo in the critique forum when the most basic composition failed, isn't it?
A better take is focus on the kopi.. now its on the newspaper..
u dun find it darn irritating with a out of focus kopi??
move the kopi abit. to get more of the shadow in play..
so ppl now its sunshine now or wat.. play more with the side light.
n the kopi is in the rule of 3rd.. or is it 2nd? hehe.. n out of focus??
a no no..
My idea if you want to fit your theme.
Stuffs to include -
Newspaper (full header)
Kopi (if u want them)
Droplet of water (to show after the rain)
Sidelight hitting into the kopi tiam
I think it would be better if you staged more "drama" into it, e.g. shoot a steaming old style cup of kopi and toast, with sunrays through a rain drop splattered window If wanna impress, go all the way